Can I write a Korean poem, too?

I do not know much about writing poems, but sometimes things just pop into my head that I feel like writing down. Here is what popped into my head today.

약속----------by Gerry Bevers

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간다 간다 간다고 결국 안 간다.
한다 한다 한다고 결국 안 한다.
약속 안 지키면 친구 없어진다.
살다 살다 살다가 혼자 죽는다.

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Promise---------by Gerry Bevers

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I'll be there, I'll be there, I'll be there, but then I'm not.

I'll do it, I'll do it, I'll do it, but then I don't.

If we neglect our promises, we lose our friends.

We live, and live, and live, then we die alone.